Comments on Paper
Your paper misses the mark in that it explains a great deal about what a security assessment is, but offers little about an actual assessment. I needed to see an actual, not theoretical, vulnerability assessment where a site is selected and an analysis done of existing security measures with recommendations for improvement. See my comments in Track Changes.
Teacher’s instructions for assignment
To be clear — I need to see a vulnerability assessment of an actual place or property. Conduct a security analysis of the assets, threats and vulnerabilities, and suggest some security countermeasures. When in doubt, refer back to Vellani Chapter 5 and see his sample in Appendix C. This assignment is much like the assignments you have been doing in the Conferences in the early weeks of the course. Which is attached